TheShred 80 @Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater A story by TheShred He wanted to have a story where he was the hero So I did the opposite :kek: :kek: In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand. in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school by the big kids like @mesvak, Not only that but when Shred got home There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying @ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers then @ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling "please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare and grabbed @tfue's hair he dragged and he dragged @tfue along as @tfue screamed clawed and struggled @ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard was his mum @Tfue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out 5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
charlietgross 0 @Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater A story by TheShred He wanted to have a story where he was the hero So I did the opposite :kek: :kek: In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand. in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school by the big kids like @mesvak, Not only that but when Shred got home There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying @ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers then @ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling "please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare and grabbed @tfue's hair he dragged and he dragged @tfue along as @tfue screamed clawed and struggled @ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard was his mum @Tfue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out 5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold. I LIKE YOIUR RHYMES MAN Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ordwise 149 :kek: :kek: :kek: :kek: :kek: i think you have confused me with @overside right? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seph 28 @Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater A story by TheShred He wanted to have a story where he was the hero So I did the opposite :kek: :kek: In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand. in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school by the big kids like @mesvak, Not only that but when Shred got home There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying @ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers then @ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling "please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare and grabbed @tfue's hair he dragged and he dragged @tfue along as @tfue screamed clawed and struggled @ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard was his mum @Tfue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out 5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold. I actually did not enjoy the read at all, but it was creative. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ordwise 149 @Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater A story by TheShred He wanted to have a story where he was the hero So I did the opposite :kek: :kek: In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand. in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school by the big kids like @mesvak, Not only that but when Shred got home There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying @ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers then @ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling "please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare and grabbed @tfue's hair he dragged and he dragged @tfue along as @tfue screamed clawed and struggled @ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard was his mum @Tfue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out 5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold. I actually did not enjoy the read at all, but it was creative. If you are not gay please delete it :pepe: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheShred 80 @Ordwise, The Wise, The Wonderful, The Wifebeater A story by TheShred He wanted to have a story where he was the hero So I did the opposite :kek: :kek: In a world quite like this one @Ordwise sat slumped down in his armchair watching a ball game with a beer in his hand. in came his son poor little shred he always got bullied at school by the big kids like @mesvak, Not only that but when Shred got home There his dad stared as he walked in the room, @Ordwise stood up and asked why he had bruises all over his face, Shred started crying @ordwise called him a bitch, little shred cried tears flowing like rivers then @ordwise raised his boot and slammed it against poor shreds face as blood came out his nose shred fell weak, not able to see straight his mother @TFue came running in sobbing and screaming yelling "please please don't hurt him" @Ordwise just gave a deep stare and grabbed @tfue's hair he dragged and he dragged @tfue along as @tfue screamed clawed and struggled @ordwise didn't change he still had the steer, he went into his room locked the door behind, all little shred heard was his mum @Tfue cry "please not the bat" then a thump then silence no noise was made, shred sat for hours waiting and waiting for his mum to come out 5 hours later his dad had gotten a beer and Shred saw his mother on the floor, blood dripping out of her hair, hands outstretched wide, naked and cold. I actually did not enjoy the read at all, but it was creative. :kek: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
