What do you guys think of my second music video?

[uvulakiller 2]

Hey cracked community, just here to spread leaks and learn to make money. I also do music, would love for you guys to give me your honest opinion on my latest music video! 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6MK9TJqc8o

[Rune 139]

ur a cancer to the earth end ur life

[Isaac 325]

It is ok for a beginner.

Bass is too hard and video is too amateurish.

 

If you didn't add too many edits and kept the bass low it would've been way better.

[mastahbruce 1]

nah bass is fine i see the sound youre going for, just need to polish yourself and your image a bit more and ivest a little more on a better cameraman/editor. Also it never hurts to do retakes and rewrite some lyrics, whatever you make in one session doesnt automatically have to come out just because its audible, try to perfect your craft little by little, I know studio time aint cheap.

[uvulakiller 2]

ur a cancer to the earth end ur life

 

ayeeeeeeeeeeeee