Devil 162 It's nice and simplistic, I like it. Thanks mate Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
clr 14 i like it maybe different font but thats only my opinion Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Copywriter 0 Not bad, I recommend you try to add little details on the objects such as the moon or little stars. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xeep 1 It looks nice, the only thing distrub to me is the font, try to use another font. but maybe its just me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mil8987 0 I would change the color of rocket's wings (or whatever it's called), too similar to the star's color. More details as recommended before Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noreg 1 to much space check the "golden cut" for better pictures Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Logout 0 Simplistic, clean, and looks somewhat professional. Not too bad in my honest opinion! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Whiterose 3 For a Noob that is pretty good! Try focus on making the text larger and standing out more! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JSpark 1 Y'could try playing a bit w/ composition, say by using the rule of third or, as said before before me, the golden ratio (tho' Iunno if y'wanna change your 500*500). Try rotating the background a bit, y'could find a sweet spot. I'm thinking that ship and its fire could pop out of Mars a bit more, maybe by making Mars less saturated or darker, if not shift the hue a bit. ...That's Mars, right? Also, yeah, the text's kinda too futuristic for this aesthetic. I like how it's clean tho', good job on that Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bloxler 1 good for a beginner. This is very good start Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
S4vage 0 Looks like a good start, I like the minimalistic theme. Would maybe play with text positioning so it's no on top of the rocket seeing as thats a focal point in the image. Like the the idea above of adding some stars as somebody said above. Also maybe some craters on the moon or on Mars, depending how far you want to stray from the simple theme. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sfh234a 1 there is room for improvement..the words n fonts are not that attention grabbing imo Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
